Question

书面表达

假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Jack来信，说他暑假期间要来中国交流学习。他学了两年中文，但是仍然担心用中文交流时会遇到困难。请你用英语给Jack写封回信，提几点建议，要点如下：

1. 大胆自信；

2. 放慢语速；

3. 借助图画或肢体语言等表达方式。

注意：1. 词数80-100；

      2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

      3. 信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；

      4. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

      参考词汇：自信的 confident      肢体语言 body language

Dear Jack,

    How is everything going? I am very glad to learn that you are coming to China this summer.                                                                                                               

Best wishes!

                                                                  Yours,

                                                                 Li Hua

Answer

One possible version:

Dear Jack,

How is everything going? I am very glad to learn that you are coming to China this summer. It’s not necessary to worry about your Chinese. I’d like to share my ideas, which I think might help.

First, be brave enough to speak Chinese when you communicate with others. It’s of great importance to be confident about yourself. We Chinese are very friendly so you needn’t be afraid of making any mistakes. Second, it’s better to speak slowly and clearly. In this way you can make yourself understood more easily. What’s more, sometimes you can use drawings or pictures, and as you know, body language is also widely used across cultures and very often it really works.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲式给材料作文。根据材料中给出的提示可知主要从三个方面给杰克提建议，以使他减少对汉语交流的担心：be confident, speak slowly, body language. 在写作中不要只是简单的描述提纲的内容，一定要根据提示进行适当的发挥。例如，speak slowly的好处是can make yourself understood more easily，。在写作中还要注意连词的使用，以便使文章通顺有逻辑性。

写作亮点：这篇短文层次分明，思路清晰，逻辑性强。首先安慰杰克，然后通过I’d like to share my ideas, which I think might help.导入到自己的建议。在提建议中使用了大量的连词及表示顺序的词，如：First, Second,，In this way ，What’s more,使文章更富有逻辑性，更条理。文章在句式，语态，上变化丰富，也为文章增色不少。

考点：提纲作文。