Question

书面表达

假设你是Annie，你的笔友Mary发邮件问起你的家乡、学校生活等情况，请你用英语回一封邮件告之。

内容包括以下几个要点：

家乡	现代化城市，离上海不远。以美味的食物闻名全国，是个居住的好地方。
学校	位于城市的西南部，干净、美丽。有图书馆、阅览室、电脑房……
班级	教室在三楼。班上同学很友好，乐于助人……（举一例）
学习	勤奋，……（补充1点）
爱好	喜爱户外活动，……（补充1点）

注意：1．词数100左右；

      2．邮件的开头、结尾已为你写好，不计人总词数；

      3．邮件须包括所有内容要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使其连贯、通顺；

      4. 邮件中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

Dear Mary,

Thanks for your last e-mail. Now let me tell you something about my home town, my school and my life here.

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I love my hometown and enjoy my school life.

I’m looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours,

Annie

Answer

My hometown Jingjiangis a modern city, and it’s not far away from Shanghai. It’s famous for its nice food all over China. I think it’s a good place to live.

My school is in the south-east of our city. It’s clean and beautiful. We have a big library, a reading-room, two music rooms ,one art room and two computer rooms. We also have a big playground.

My classroom is on the third floor. My classmates are very friendly and helpful. When we have problems, we often help each other.

I work hard on all my subjects, but I’m not good at Chinese. I need to read more and speak more.

I like outdoor activities. My favoutite outdoor activity is camping, because I like being outside, near beautiful lakes and hills.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇材料作文，是作者Annie写给笔友Mary的一封电子邮件，文中介绍了家乡，学校的请情况。本文要写的材料比较具体，我们要做的就是运用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。我们要好好选用词汇和短语，可以适当发挥。文中用一般现在的时态来写。

写作亮点：这篇短文短文内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整。词汇和句型句式运用恰当，时态应用准确。

考点：提纲作文