Question

书面表达。

南京市政网上贴出了一张海报，评选幸福指数最高的社区。请阅读海报内容，写一份推荐信，介绍你所在的社区。

注意：

1．文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；

2．语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；

3．词数80左右，文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear sir：

I would like to recommend my neighbourhood to be the happiest one in Nanjing.

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Answer

Dear sir：

I would like to recommend my neighbourhood to be the happiest one in Nanjing. Our neighbourhood is clean， beautiful， civilized and harmonious. Our neighbours are friendly， kind and helpful. If somebody is in need， we will give a hand to him. We get along well with each other. When we meet each other， we will always say hello to one another. There are some activities in our community all the year around， like playing balls， Square dance， playing chess， the singing contest and so on. I often play basketball. I love my neighbourhood. We live happily in the community.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。本文给出了提示，我们要根据提示的内容进行写作，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥，句子要正确，要注意时态、主谓一致等问题。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态。文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称； 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范； 词数80左右。

写作亮点：这篇是一篇优秀的范文，字数符合要求，语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范。文中使用了一些固定句式及短语We get along well with each other. If somebody is in need， we will give a hand to him.等，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

考点：考查提纲类作文。