Question

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假如你是Li Ming，你的朋友Billy 要来宁波。Billy希望他在宁波期间，你能抽出一天时间陪他玩，请你根据下面提供的信息，给他写一封回信，告诉他那天的安排。要求：70词左右(邮件开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；时态准确；语句通顺。

8:10 a.m. 乘14路公共汽车去儿童公园（Children’s Park)

10:30 a.m. 参观保国寺（Baoguo Temple),因为这里很著名，有着悠久的历史。

11:50a.m. 吃午饭

1:00 p.m.去江北万达广场购物（Jiangbei Wanda Square),广场很新也很漂亮。

5:00 p.m. 去Li Ming 家做客。

Dear Billy,

Welcome to Ningbo.I am very glad that we can play together for a day.

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Yours truly,

Li Ming

Answer

Dear Billy,

Welcome to Ningbo.I am very glad that we can play together for a day.

Let me tell you our plan. We are going to take a number 14 bus to the Children's Park at 8:10 a.m. We will have much fun there. Then at 10:30 a.m. We are going to visit Baoguo Temple.It is very famous here and it has a long history. We are going to have lunch at 11:50 a.m. After lunch, we are going shopping at Jiangbei Wanda Square. It is very new and beautiful.And the things are very nice and beautiful. At 5:00 p.m. We are going to Li Ming's house for dinner.

I believe we will have a great time.

Yours truly,

Li Ming

【解析】

试题分析：本题是一篇给提纲类作文。要求给朋友写一封信，介绍一下朋友来宁波参观的一天的行程安排。短文要以时间先后为序，对行程作恰当的介绍，短文用一般将来时态，第一人称形式。短文要注意词组的选择及句型的选用，要注意句式的多样化，使短文生动具体。

写作亮点：短文第一段表达了对朋友的欢迎及期待。welcome to及宾语从句运用得准确恰当；第二段第一句总起，然后以时间先后为顺序，详细介绍了这一天的活动安排。本段be going to，will的交替使用；时间状语的忽前忽后，注意了句式的多样化。层次清楚，具体生动。最后一段以“我相信我们将会度过愉快的一天”结局，与第一段首尾呼应。

考点：考查提纲作文。