Question

写作

假如你是Alice, 你想写一封推荐信，推荐你的同学Daniel获得今年的新星奖。推荐

信字数为80词左右。开头，结尾已给出，不计入总字数。

Excellent qualities （优秀的品质）	Good examples （好的事例）
乐于助人	1．经常帮助邻居修电脑； 2．……（至少一点）
聪明	1．学东西快，努力学习各门学科； 2．野营时甚至会搭建帐篷。
勇敢	一个周日的早晨，他像往常一样，坐在湖边看书。突然听到一个女孩大声呼救，他跳进湖里，把小女孩从水里救了上来，并送她回家。
……	……（至少两句）

Dear Sir / Madam,

I would like to recommend Daniel for this year’s Young Star Award.

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All the students in our class think that Daniel should get the award. We look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours faithfully,

Alice

Answer

One possible version：

Dear Sir / Madam:

I would like to recommend Daniel for this year’s Young Star Award.

Daniel is a helpful boy. He often helps his neighbors fix computers. He always gives his seat to someone on the bus.He is also clever. He learns things quickly. He works hard on all the subjects. He is even able to put up tents when we go camping.He is brave, too. One Sunday morning, he sat by the lake and read books as usual. Suddenly, he heard a girl calling for help. He jumped into the lake and saved the girl from the water. At last, he sent her home.Daniel is polite and kind to others. He always says “hello” to his teachers. He thinks carefully when he works. He plans everything well. He often takes part in all kinds of activities like collecting clothes and books for the children in need.

All the students in our class think that Daniel should get the award. We look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours faithfully,

Alice

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，本文推荐Daniel 获得今年的新星奖，内容应包括表格内所有的信息。介绍Daniel的优秀品质和好的事例。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般过去时，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I would like to...，Daniel is ...，he sat by...，He thinks ...，All the students in our class think that....等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我想要推荐Daniel获得今年的新星奖，接下来介绍Daniel的品质和所做的好事，最后全班同学认为Daniel应得到这个奖。此处would like to, give one’s seat to, work hard, put up, hear sb doing sth, call for help, be kind to, take part in, all kinds of, look forward to等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

考点：提纲作文。