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课外活动可以让我们增长知识，发展智力，开阔视野。许多学校开展了课外活动。最近，某中学英文报开设了“After–class Activities”的栏目。请根据以下提示，为该栏目写一篇英文稿件，并鼓励同学们积极参加课外活动。

内容包括：

1. 谈谈课外活动的好处（两点）并介绍你学校开展的课外活动有哪些。

2. 例举一项你参加过的课外活动，并谈谈你从中的收获和感受。

3. 呼吁同学们积极参加课外活动。

作文要求：

1. 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实的学校名及本人姓名。

2. 语句连贯。80词左右。作文开头已给出，不计入总词数。

                               After–class Activities

      Nowadays, after–class Activities are becoming more and more popular in junior schools. _______________________________________________________________________________

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Answer

After–class Activities

Nowadays, after–class Activities are becoming more and more popular in junior schools. After-class activities are very good for students. First, after-class activities can help students relax, because students have a lot of homework, they are under much pressure. Second, after-class activities can help students learn new skills from the activities. They are very useful to them for their work and life in the future. In our school, there are many kinds of after-class activities such as chess club, music club, art club, English club and so on.

Last year I took part in the English club. I learnt a lot from the club. I improved my oral English so much and now I can speak well. I feel very pleased with it.

I hope everybody can take an active part in after-school activities.

【解析】

试题分析：本题要求写一篇鼓励学生参加课外活动的英文稿件的提纲作文。根据提纲要求，短文要从参加课外活动的好处、学校课外活动的种类、自己参加活动的亲身体验并呼吁同学积极参加课外活动几方面展开写作。首先讲课外活动的好处及学校的活动种类，用一般现在时态；然后讲述自己参加活动的经历，用一般过去时态。短文用第一人称形式。

写作亮点：短文首先讲述课外活动的好处，用more and more, be good for两个短语构成的句子先总体讲解；然后用first, second讲述两个主要的原因。层次清楚。用到的help sb. do sth, be useful to ,准确恰当。然后列举了学校的活动种类。第二段介绍作者去年参加活动的经历，take part in, learn from, pleased with等等短语的使用，增加了本文的文采。最后以I hope开始的带宾语从句的复合句结束全文，呼吁大家积极参加课外活动，主题鲜明，中心突出。总之，本范文包含了提纲的所有要点，达到了训练的写作目的，是一篇较好的范文。

考点：考查提纲作文。