Question

书面表达：。

假如你是Simon, 你给你的朋友Lucy写一封邮件，告诉她有关于你们学校一次名为‘Sell for Children’的慈善活动。邮件内容包括以下要点：

1. 下周五，你校将组织这一慈善活动，目的是为有困难的孩子们筹钱，他们负担不起学费，我们应该帮助他们。你认为这很有意义。

2. 必须卖光所有的东西。校长（headmaster）会被邀请来这次活动。

3. 你希望更多的人能加入这项活动，你相信……。

要求：

1、短文须包括以上所有内容要点，语句通顺、意思连贯；

2、词数80字左右，文章开头与结尾已经给出，但不计入总字数。

3、第三要点自由发挥，写1-2句。

Sell for Children

Dear Lucy,

I haven’t heard from you for a long time. I’d like to tell you something about ‘Sell for Children’.                                                                    

What do you think of it? Write to me soon.

                                                    Best wishes, Simon

Answer

One possible version：

Sell for Children

Dear Lucy,

I haven’t heard from you for a long time. I’d like to tell you something about ‘Sell for Children’. Our school will hold the charity activity next Friday. The purpose of it is to raise money for children in need. They can’t afford to go to school. We should help them. I think it is very meaningful. All the things must be sold out. The headmaster will be invited to the activity. I hope more people will come to join it. I believe helping others is fun. Many hands make light work. It can make our world better.

What do you think of it? Write to me soon.

Best wishes, Simon

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，Simon写信给Lucy介绍学校将进行的一次名为‘Sell for Children’的慈善活动。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I’d like to ...，Our school will...； I think it is...；I hope ...；It can...等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系.

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了写信目的——要介绍关于‘Sell for Children’的慈善活动；接下来介绍活动的时间，目的，邀请的人以及要做的事；最后希望这次活动使世界更美好。此处would like to,tell sb about sth, in need, afford to do sth, sold out, think of, write to等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

考点：提纲作文。