Question

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Smith 夫妇的孩子Alex 已经一个星期没有回家了，他的父母很为他着急。请您为他们写一则寻人启事。

Name	Alex
Age	14
Appearance	Tall, of medium build, short hair,big eyes, a small nose,a big mouth, wear glasses
Clothes	White shirt, blue pants, black shoes
Telephone	602-2615

Have you seen a girl anywhere？____________________________________

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Answer

Have you seen a girl anywhere? My daughter Alex hasn’t been home for a week. Could you please help us find her? We are very worried. She is 14 years old. She is tall and of medium build. She has short hair. She has two big eyes, a small nose and a big mouth. She wears glasses. She wears white shirt, blue pants and black shoes. If you see her ,you can call us at 602-2615. Thank you.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇短文要求我们写一篇寻人启事。短文中给出了具体的写作内容，我们需要用正确的英语将这些内容表达出来。在短文中我们主要用到的是描写一个人的外貌的句型和词汇，这些句型和词汇是学生们比较熟悉的。但是写作的时候，要注意使用正确的be动词和实意动词，例如描写身高的是时候是be tall or short；而说到头发、戴眼镜等时，需要用动词have或者wear。通过分析可知，这篇作文我们应使用一般现在时态，第三人称单数she来叙述，因此我们要特别注意谓语动词第三人称单数形式的变化。另外要注意短文的语气，写好开头和结尾。

写作亮点：这是一篇优秀的范文。这篇短文中作者按照题目的要求写了一篇寻人启事，在短文中介绍了要找的人Alex的外貌和穿着，并且给出了自己的联系方式。短文的内容完整，包含了题目中给出的所有要点，使用了正确的人称和时态，尤其是注意了第三人称单数形式的变化，语法非常的准确。作者还正确使用了be动词的形式和实意动词，在描写外貌的时候，使用了正确的句型，如She is tall and of medium build. She has short hair. She has two big eyes, a small nose and a big mouth. She wears glasses。短文的开头表现出来父母的焦急的心情，My daughter Alex hasn’t been home for a week. Could you please help us find her? We are very worried；最后又向人们表示了感谢。这样的首尾呼应，使文章非常的完整。

考点：提纲类作文。