Question

书面表达

为了践行社会主义核心价值观，我校决定进行以“文明礼貌伴我行”为主题的英语征文比赛，请你根据以下要点提示及要求，写篇短文参赛。

重要提示：

1.尊敬(respect)父母，帮助他们做家务。

2.对人有礼貌，诚实友好，帮助他人。

3.不在公共场所大声讲话，不乱扔垃圾。

4.节约粮食，节约用水。

要求：1.短文需包含以上所有信息，可适当发挥。

2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整。

3.文中不能出现本人的真实信息。

4.字数要求在80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Try to be polite as a middle school student

As a middle school student, we should have good manners ___________________________         

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_____.In a word, good manners can make a difference and lead to a better future.

Answer

Try to be polite as a middle school student

As a middle school student, we should have good manners. First, parents are our closest people. We should respect them and try to help them do housework. In school, we should be polite to others. We should be honest and friendly. We also need to help others as often as possible. In public places, we can’t speak loudly and can’t throw rubbish everywhere. In our daily life, we should save food and water.

In a word, good manners can make a difference and lead to a better future.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇短文要求我们写一篇征文，为了学校进行的“文明礼貌伴我行”的活动。题目中给出了具体的写作内容，我们需要结合自己的日常生活的情况，将这些内容补充丰富一下。通过分析可知，这篇短文我们应使用一般现在时态，第一人称来叙述。题目中给出的四点内容都要包括在内，不要遗漏要点。还需要注意内容的层次，要有条理。写作时，要尽量使用一些平时积累的句型和短语，句子之间要使用一些连词，使文意连贯，表达流畅。

写作亮点：这是一篇优秀的作文，短文中作者按照题目的要求，讲述了如何做一名有礼貌的中学生。短文中作者分成了几个方面来叙述，首先是如何对待父母；其次是如何对待别人；然后在公共场合如何做；最后是在日常生活中的做法。整篇短文层次清晰，内容完整。另外短文中也使用了一些好的句型和短语，如We should respect them and try to help them do housework、We should be honest and friendly. We also need to help others as often as possible、In our daily life, we should save food and water等。

考点：提纲类作文。