Question

书面表达。

你叫李华，你校将开展一个题为“Thank you, my dear teacher”的英语写作活动。请按要求写一篇英语短文。内容包括：

1. 你对英语老师Ms. Li 的感谢。

2. 老师如何帮助你学习英语。

3. 你取得的进步。

4. 请用具体事例说明2或3

5. 词数80字左右

Answer

I love English because I have a good English teacher Ms. Li. She is always patient and kind to her students. She helps me a lot with my English. so I want to show my respect to her.

At first, when I began to learn English, I could not say anything to others. I didn’t study English so well before that. I often asked questions, but my dear teacher answered me carefully every time. In order to improve my English, Ms. Li gave me more exercises and she taught me how to memorize English words, too.

I learn a lot from Ms. Li. I become more fluent in English, I am confident in using English now. Thank you, my dear teacher.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文要求我们以Thank you, my dear teacher为题，写一篇短文，向自己的老师表示感谢。短文中给出了具体的写作内容，我们应用正确的英语将这些内容表达出来。通过分析可知，这篇短文中我们要根据具体的表达需要确定正确的时态，主要是一般现在时和一般过去时态。注意每句话中谓语动词形式的变化，尤其注意不规则动词的过去式形式。第二条和第四条内容需要学生自己来补充，应将老师如何帮助自己的过程叙述清楚。写作时，要尽量使用一些好的句型和短语，句子之间加上一些连词或是副词，使整篇短文意思连贯，表达流畅。

写作亮点：这是一篇优秀的作文，短文中作者根据题目的要求介绍了自己的英语老师，并讲述了老师是如何帮助自己学习英语的，因此在文章中向老师表示感谢。短文共分三段，第一段先点明自己想要感谢的老师是英语老师，英语老师是怎样的一个人；第二段是文章的主体，介绍了老师是如何帮助自己学习英语的；最后是一个总结，并再次向老师表示感谢。短文中使用了一些较好的句型，如She is always patient and kind to her students. She helps me a lot with my English. so I want to show my respect to her、At first, when I began to learn English, I could not say anything to others、In order to improve my English, Ms. Li gave me more exercises and she taught me how to memorize English words, too等。

考点：提纲类作文。