Question

学校将在下周举行英文演讲比赛，Jack的话题是 “对我影响最深的人”，请根据以下材料，帮他组织一篇90字左右英文演讲稿，介绍一下三位对他影响最深的人。

Persons	Details
My father	1. 40多岁，充满爱心 2. 令我惊讶的是，他已决定去世后捐赠遗体供医学研究
Tan Dun	1. 1958年出生在湖南省中部地区，从小对音乐很感兴趣 2. 成功地把中西方音乐融合在一起
Jackie Chan	1.已参演了近100部影片，获得了许多奖项 2. 多年从事慈善工作（具体表现用1到2句话说明） 3. 被公认为是一位超级明星，受到人们高度赞扬

The persons who have influenced me most

I am happy to give a speech here. My topic is “the persons who have influenced me most”. They are my father, Tan Dun and Jackie Chan.

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They are all my heroes. From now on , I will learn from them.

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The persons who have influenced me most

I am happy to give a speech here. My topic is “the persons who have influenced me most”. They are my father, Tan Dun and Jackie Chan.

My father is in his forties. He has a heart full of love. To my surprise, he has decided to donate his body for medical research after his death.

Tan Dun was born in central Hunan, China. When he was very young, Tan Showed an interest in Music. He has successfully brought Chinese and Western music together.

Jackie Chan has acted in nearly 100 films and has won many awards. He has spent many years doing charity work.He often donates much money to help poor people. He is considered as a super star and is thought highly of by many people.

They are all my heroes. From now on, I will learn from them.

【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，本文是一篇演讲介绍对我影响最深的人。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态和现在完成时，人称为单数第三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I am happy to……；They are……；My father is……；Jackie Chan has acted…….；等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系.

点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我演讲的题目是“对我影响最深的人”，接下来介绍这三个人的情况，最后指出他们都是我们的英雄，我应向他们学习。此处give a speech, full of, to one’s surprise, decide to do sth, show an interest in, spend time doing sth, donate money to do sth, be considered as, think highly of, from now on, learn from等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。