Question

扬州市公共自行车租赁系统已经启动近一年，《扬州日报》英文版举办了名为“Are the

  public bicycles necessary?”的英文征文活动，你班就此话题也展开了讨论，同学们意见不一。请根据下列表格提示的内容，用英语写一篇短文进行投稿，反映讨论结果并发表自己的观点。

观点	理由
80%的学生认为有必要	1. 人们出行更容易；2. 保护环境；3. ……
20%的学生认为没必要	1. 购买和维修自行车要花很多钱；2. 出门可以骑自己家里的自行车；3. ……
我的观点	1. ……  2. ……

要求：1.表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；

    2. 必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥；

    3. 词数：100词左右（征文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）；

    4。不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。

    Are the public bicycles necessary?

Yangzhou Public Bicycle System has been into use for nearly a year. Recentlv, our class had a discussion on whether the public bicycles are necessary. Different students have different ideas.

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Answer

Are the public bicycles necessary?

Yangzhou Public Bicycle System has been into use for nearly a year. Recently, our class had a discussion on whether the public bicycles are necessary. Different students have different ideas.

Eighty percent of the students agree with it.. They think the public bicycles are necessary. First, it is easier for people to travel. Second, it can help protect the environment. Third, it can reduce traffic accidents. But twenty percent of the students don't agree with them. They think it costs too much to buy and fix bicycles. And they also think they can ride their own bikes when going out. What's more, they think it is not convenient to rent bikes in town. In my opinion, we should encourage more people to use the public bicycles because it will bring us a more beautiful world.

【解析】这篇作文要求我们以Are the public bicycles necessary为题目，介绍一下自己班级对这个公共自行车的讨论，并发表自己的观点。短文应包括三个主要内容：首先介绍扬州公共自行车的使用情况；其次介绍同学们对这件事的观点；最后发表自己的观点。题目中已经将大部分的写作内容列举了出来，我们用正确的英语来表达就行。还有一部分内容需要自己发挥想象力进行补充，要注意符合文意表达的要求。通过分析可知，这篇短文应使用一般现在时态，注意正确使用谓语动词的形式。写作时，还应在文章中使用一些较好的句型和短语，使文章表达流畅、连贯。

点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文，短文中作者介绍了扬州公共自行车的使用情况以及同学们对这件事的看法，还发表了自己的观点。短文内容完整，包含了题目要求的所有信息，将表格里缺少的内容进行了补充，非常合理，能使上下文意通顺、连贯。作文里也使用了正确的人称和时态，动词形式变化准确，短语使用也很正确。短文里还用了一些较好的句型，如Recently, our class had a discussion on whether the public bicycles are necessary. Different students have different ideas、They think the public bicycles are necessary、and they also think they can ride their own bikes when going out. What's more, they think it is not convenient to rent bikes in town、In my opinion, we should encourage more people to use the public bicycles because it will bring us a more beautiful world等。