Question

我国不少城市正在推广公共自行车，提倡人们“绿色出行，低碳生活”。在漳州，越来越多的市民选择公共自行车出行。自行车给人们的出行带来了便利，但也出现了一些问题。请根据下面的图表, 写一篇80个词左右的短文，谈谈推广公共自行车的好处和存在的问题及你的愿望。

要求：语篇连贯，逻辑清晰，语言表达流畅。

好处	1、停车方便
2、节约能源，环保
3、租或还都很快捷，花费少
4、…
问题	1、乱停放
	2、不爱护自行车
愿望	…

Now, public bikes are provided for people in many cities in China. In Zhangzhou, you can also find a lot of bikes around us.__________________________________________________

Answer

Now puplic bikes are provided for people in many cities in China. In Zhangzhou, you can also find a lot of bikes around us. More and more people like going out by bike these days. There are many reasons. First, it’s easy to park bikes wherever you go. Second, cycling can save energy and it doesn’t cause air pollution. It’s good for our environment. Third, it’s very easy to rent and return bikes and it costs only a little. What’s more, cycling can help us keep healthy.

On the other hand, some of us park bikes in the wrong place. Even worse, some people don’t care for the public bikes. I hope more and more people can choose the bikes to go out and protect them well.

【解析】这篇短文要求我们以公共自行车为线索，写一篇关于与环保相关的作文。题目中已经规定了这篇短文的写作提纲，主要包括两个部分。一个是关于推广公共自行车的优势，一个是阐述一下自己的愿望。关于使用公共自行车的优势，提纲中具体列出了三点，自己需要列出第四点优势。最后，自己还要写出关于公共自行车推广或者对整个环保工作的愿望。因此，本篇作文，不仅要考虑到如何准确生动的表达出已列出的观点，还要表达出自己的想法。写作时，需注意语句间的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅。