Question

在你的成长过程中，许多人、许多事物一直在陪伴着你、支持着你、温暖着你，让你感动、伴你成长。请以“Say thanks to          ”为题，写一篇短文。

要求:1.写出要感谢的对象、原因及感激语言；

2.语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯;

3.词数80—100词，书写工整、规范;

4.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。

Answer

Say thanks to my teachers

How time flies! My junior high school lives will come to end.

In the past three years, I have studied in a beautiful school which provides me with a good study place. Teachers in my school also give me lots of help. Whenever I was in trouble, you always stood around me to comfort me. You taught me how to be a good person and gave me the courage to face difficulties. You are my friends. So I want to say, I love you, my dear teachers. I have grown up happily with your help. I hope you will be happy and healthy forever.

【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，请以“Say thanks to ”为题，写一篇短文。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般过去时，人称为第一，二人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I have studied in……，Whenever I was……，You taught me……，You are……，I hope……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我的初中生活将要结束了，接下来介绍老师给我提供的帮助，最后我希望老师健康快乐。此处come to end， in the past+时间段，provide sb with sth, give sb sth, in trouble, want to do sth, grow up等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。