Question

今年“五一”你和你的家人去哪里游玩了？请以My May Day为题写一则日记和大家一起分享吧！信息要点如下：

1．Where did you go on May day? 2．Who did you go with? 3．How did you go there? 4．How was the weather there? What did you do there? 5．How did you feel?

要求：1．不要遗漏所提供的信息。2．字数在80词左右。

Answer

My May Day

Hello, today is May Day. It is sunny. My father, mother and sister and I went shopping this morning. We bought, ice creams, toasts, butter, orange, milk and rolls. And my mother bought toys for me. After that we went to zoo. I saw tigers, and lions, and zebras. My sister asked me “what do you like?” I answered “I like skipping rope. That’s very nice.” She said “Here is your prize, Sunny!” “Oh, thank you! I love it!” I shouted. We sat under a tree. After lunch we drank some milk. I have a good time today.

【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，以My May Day为题写一则日记和大家一起分享你和家人五一这一天的活动。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般过去时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的运用用，比如：It is……，We bought……，After that we went to……，My sister asked me……，She said……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了五一这天的天气，接下来介绍了我们一家人的活动，最后表达了我玩得非常高兴。此处go shopping, buy sth for sb, like doing sth, after lunch, have a good time等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。