Question

你的英国笔友Tom想要了解你最喜爱的中国节日，请你以Jerry的身份写一封回信，向他介绍中国的一个传统节日——中秋节。词数70以上。

参考词汇：Chinese lunar year阴历

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Answer

Dear Tom,

Thanks for your email. I like Mid-Autumn Day best① of all the traditional Chinese festivals. We always celebrate MidAutumn Day on August 15 according to Chinese lunar year. People try to get back home from other places on that day. We usually have a big family dinner at night and enjoy the beautiful moon together. And we all eat a kind of food — mooncakes.

It’s my favorite festival because I like staying with my family and that can make me feel relaxed②.

Yours,

Jerry

【解析】试题分析：这是一篇话题作文，内容我们很熟悉----中国的一个传统节日——中秋节，讲述过节的情景。包括节日名称、时间、美食、活动方式及意义等；语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；词数要符合要求。要尽量使用一些好的句型和连词，最好使用我们熟悉和背过的句型，尽量不要使用复杂的从句，减少语法错误，不要犯单词拼写上的错误。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较优秀的作文。内容要点完整、应用词汇灵活准确，句子通顺、行文连贯、表达清楚，上下文连贯。应用了较丰富的语法结构和词汇，没有语言错误。无拼写错误，字数符合要求。