Question

你和两个好朋友(Tom和Mike)都喜欢同一种运动，但性格、爱好又不完全相同。根据提示内容写一篇不少于80词的 短文，注意使用比较级的句式。

Answer

I have two good friends. They are Tom and Mike. I am shorter than Tom, and Tom is shorter than Mike. We all like playing football, but I am better at it than Tom, and Tom is better at it than Mike. I am quiet, but Tom is outgoing, and Mike is more outgoing than Tom. Tom is smarter than Mike, and I am smarter than Tom. I like math and physics. Tom likes history. Mike likes P. E. , and he is more athletic than us two. We all study hard.

【解析】短文介绍你和自己的好朋友喜欢相同的运动，但是性格。爱好不同，所以应该用一般现在时，句子的主语用第一人，或第三人称。必须用上比较级。短文用了一些短语和句式，如：We all like playing football, but I am better at it than Tom, and Tom is better at it than Mike. Mike likes P. E. , and he is more athletic than us two.用了并列连词but和and增加了文章的亮点。

点睛：1.仔细审题，明确要求。审读所给信息，弄清楚所要表达的内容要点，然后对所给的信息进行梳理，可根据内容要点适当调整写作顺序，使文章行文连贯。

2.列全要点，即提纲要点化，然后写作成文。

此时我们就必须在大脑中将各种信息点补充完整，适时使用高级词汇和复杂句式。要根据提示将要点表达清楚，使文章的内容完整、饱满、要点齐全，注意适当增加细节。同时注意句子与句子之间，段落与段落之间要有合理的过渡衔接。

3.检查核实，确保无误。