Question

请你根据下面表格中的提示，介绍你家附近的这两家商店。

要求:

1.必须包括表格中的所有信息。

2. 表达你是否喜欢这两家店。

3. 词数不少于80。开头已经给出，不计人总词数。

Let me tell you about two stores near my home. One is Funny Clothes Store and_____________________________                                    

Answer

Let me tell you about two stores near my home. One is Funny Clothes Store and the other one is Family Fruit Store.

Funny Clothes Store is the best in our city. It has the best service and it has the best quality clothes. But the clothes are the most expensive. I like the Funny Clothes Store and I often buy clothes there.

Let's look at Family Fruit Store. It has the best quality fruits. There are some different kinds of fruits in Family Fruit Store and the fruits are the cheapest. I like Family Fruit Store although it has the worst service.

【解析】这篇作文要求我们根据提示介绍一下自己家附近的两个商店，信息包括：两个商店的名字、服务质量以及里面商品的价格。这篇文章主要考查学生们使用形容词和副词的比较等级去表达句子，因此在文章中要注意正确使用形容词和副词的原级、比较级和最高级形式，首先形式变化要准确，其次比较级和最高级的使用要准确。写作时，注意表达要有条理，一项一项的去比较，不要乱写，杂乱无章。在文章中可以使用一些适当的短语和过度词，使整篇文章意思连贯、表达流畅。

点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求介绍了这两个商店的情况。首先短文内容完整，开头先引出两个商店Let me tell you about two stores near my home. One is Funny Clothes Store and the other one is Family Fruit Store.，结尾有自己的总结like Family Fruit Store although it has the worst service.。中间的内容也很充实，包括了题目中给出的所有要点。其次短文中正确使用了形容词和副词的比较级和最高级形式，如Funny Clothes Store is the best in our city. It has the best service and it has the best quality clothes. But the clothes are the most expensive、It has the best quality fruits. There are some different kinds of fruits in Family Fruit Store and the fruits are the cheapest.等。整篇短文意思连贯、表达流畅。