Question

假如你是Ivy，你们学校正在开展“爱心传递，从我做起”主题教育活动。请你根据所列提示问题谈谈你对这个活动的认识，用英语写一篇短文给某英文网站投稿。

提示问题：

(1) Why do you show your kindness to others? (At least one reason)

(2) What do you usually do when someone needs help? (At least two examples)

(3) How do you feel?

写作要求：

(1) 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；

(2) 必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥；

(3) 词数：100词左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)；

(4) 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。

At my school, we are talking about what we can do to give hands to others in trouble.

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Answer

At my school, we are talking about what we can do to give hands to others in trouble.

It is very important for us to show our kindness to others because everyone needs help when they get into trouble. Helping others is helping ourselves.

As a student, I usually send my books or money to the children in poor areas. When winter comes, I often offer some warm clothes to them. I always write to the children and know what they need. Then I try my best to meet their needs in their daily life. Now we have become close friends.

I feel very proud when they tell me they have made great progress at school. I will call on more people to help them.

【解析】本文叙述自己对爱心传递，从我做起的活动的看法，为什么要给其他的人爱心，当别人需要帮助的时候应该怎么做，自己的感觉怎样，这里叙述的是自己的情况，所以句子应该用一般现在时，句子的主语用第一人称单数形式。注意不要遗漏要点，所写的句子应该符合英语语法，不要写汉语式的英语。短文用了一些短语和句式，如：It is +形容词+ for sb to do sth； get into trouble进入困境；make great progress取得很大的进步；write to sb给某人写信；用了because，when引导的从句，增加了文章的亮点。

点睛：1.审清题意，圈理要点。认真研读试题所提供的每句文字或每一幅图,从而明确作文的要求及中心思想,判断作文的类型、特点, 了解其重点内容,力求写作切中题意, 既要做到不漏点,又要防止过分离题发挥。

2. 确定基调， 一气呵成。通过分析, 要为文章的四个特点定调:

a. 人称、口吻; b.时态; 顺序、段落; c. 开头、结尾。

3. 套用句型，学会＂变通＂,慎用长句。

要写好一篇作文，不仅要做到单词拼写正确，还要注意文章结构．不要过于谨慎，通篇都使用简单句，这样很难得高分的．句子应有长有短，但是长句要求的语言水平较高，很容易出错．因此我们一方面要学会＂变通＂，也就是说换一种形式来说出要表达的意思。