Question

这周将有一些美国交流学生来我校, 你想邀请其中一对双胞胎Lucy和Lily五一节来你家做客，你打算带领他们参观你居住的小区，并组织一些活动。根据下面提供的信息，用英语写一封邀请信。

位置	位于市中心
环境	空气清新，鸟语花香
邻居	友好善良，一些志愿者经常在社区中心(the community center)集中，分享自己的一技之长 帮助人们解决各种问题(举两例) 大家就像一家人
活动	上午去包河公园划船 下午去博物馆看精美的艺术品并用粉笔画3-D画 晚上去万达影院观看电影美女与野兽（Beauty and the Beast）。

要求：不要逐句翻译，包含所有要点，注意格式，字数100左右。

Dear Lucy and Lily,

I would like to invite you to my home.                                                   

                                                                                    Yours,

Li Hua

Answer

Dear Lucy and Lily,

I would like to invite you to my home. My new home is in the center of the city. The air is fresh. The birds are singing and the flowers are sweet. My neighbors are friendly and kind. Some of them often meet at the community center and share their different skills. They often help people with all kinds of problems. Some of them often visit the old people and do some shopping for them. This weekend, they’ll help the old people clean their flats. People here are like a big family.

In the morning we are going boating in Baohe Park. In the afternoon we are going to the museum to see fine works of art and draw 3-D pictures with chalk. And at night we’ll go to the Wanda Cinema to watch the film Beauty and the Beast. I am looking forward to seeing you.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】这篇作文要求我们介绍自己居住的小区，题目中给出了具体的写作内容，我们需要用正确的英语表达出来。内容包括：小区所处的位置、环境、介绍自己的邻居、以及给Lily和Lucy安排的一些活动。写作时，要把题目中要求的所有内容都表达出来，不能遗漏要点，其中介绍邻居的这一部分中需要举出具体的事例，这需要学生们自己发挥想象力来补充。短文应使用一般现在时态，根据表达的需要变化动词的正确形式，如主语的人称、单复数等。在短文中，以简单句表达为主，辅以复合句。还需要注意在句子之间使用一些过度词，使上下文意连贯。使用一些固定的短语和句型，使文章表达流畅。

点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者按照题目要求，介绍了自己句中的社区，并给Lily和Lucy安排组织了一些活动。首先短文内容完整，包含了题目要求的所有信息，对需要自己发挥的部分进行了补充，符合上下文的表达需要，能够跟短文顺畅地连接起来。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，句型表达符合英语的表达习惯，语法规范、准确。短文中使用了一些较好的复合句和过度短语，如Some of them often meet at the community center and share their different skills. 、They often help people with all kinds of problems. 、Some of them often visit the old people and do some shopping for them.、 This weekend, they’ll help the old people clean their flats. People here are like a big family.、In the afternoon we are going to the museum to see fine works of art and draw 3-D pictures with chalk.等。