Question

我国不少城市正在推广公共自行车，提倡人们“绿色出行，低碳生活”。请你参考以下内容要点谈谈推广公共自行车的好处。

1.首先，骑自行车更方便(convenient)，可以很容易地租还(rent and return)；

2.其次，众所周知(as we all know)，在上学、上班时段交通特别繁忙，如果有更多的人选择自行车，街道上就会有更少的汽车，也不会那么拥挤；

3还有……（请至少补充两点）

短文必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥，80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

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I hope more and more people can ride bikes and live a low-carbon life.

Answer

Now public bikes are provided for people in many cities in China. I think it’s a good thing. To live a low-carbon life, we should call on people to ride bikes instead of driving cars. First, bikes are much more convenient than cars and people can rent and return them easily. Second, as we know, there’s usually a heavy traffic when we are on the way to school or work. If more people ride bikes then there are fewer cars on the road, and there won’t be too crowded. Third, it’s the most important that riding bikes won’t produce the dirty air to make pollution to our environment. And we can ride bikes to keep fit. Let’s ride bikes instead of driving cars to protect the environment!

I hope more and more people can ride bikes and live a low-carbon life.

【解析】这篇作文要求我们介绍很多城市推广骑自行车的这一现象，并说明推广公共自行车的好处。 题目中给出了一部分写作的内容，我们可以针对这些提示，组织语言，展开写作。其中第三条的内容是需要学生们自己来补充的，这就需要学生们自己发挥想象力，再写出两条骑自行车的好处。写作时，应注意英语表达和汉语的区别，不要写汉语式的英语，使用平时积累的短语和句型去表达，多使用简单句，再加上几个复合句或者并列句，使文章富有节奏。句与句之间可以使用一些过渡词和短语，使上下文意衔接紧凑，文章意思连贯。

点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文，短文中给我们介绍了骑公共自行车的好处。首先短文内容完整，包含了题目中给出的所有信息，并对骑自行车的好处进行了补充，使文章的内容更加充实。所补充的内容也非常合乎情理，体现了文章的中心。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和语态，语法规范，表达符合英语的习惯。短文中以简单句为主，也使用了一些复合句或并列句，如First, bikes are much more convenient than cars and people can rent and return them easily是个并列句；再如as we know, there’s usually a heavy traffic when we are on the way to school or work. If more people ride bikes then there are fewer cars on the road, and there won’t be too crowded.是两个状语从句。另外文章中还使用了动词不定式、动名词、固定短语等，整篇文章表达流畅，意思连贯。