Question

根据提示,以“My Best Friend为题写一篇短文,比较你俩的特征,至少10句话。

提示: 1.我的好友名叫Linda;

2.在某些方面,我们看上去一样;在某些方面,我们看起来不同;

3..我们都有黑眼睛,黑头发;

4.她比我高,比我文静,很认真;

5.我外向一点,而且比她风趣;

6.都喜欢读书。

My Best Friend

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Answer

My Best Friend

My best friend is Linda. She is a 13-year-old girl. She is as old as me. In some ways, we look the same. But in some ways, we are different. Both of us have black eyes and black hair. But her hair is longer than mine. She is taller and quieter than me. She is serious. I am more outgoing than her. We both like reading. I am funnier than her, so I am more popular at school. I hope we can be good friends forever.

【解析】这篇作文要求我们以My Best Friend为题目，根据提示介绍自己最好的朋友Linda的情况。题目中给出了具体的写作内容，我们需要用正确的英语将这些内容表达出来。首先需要注意内容的完整，应包含题目中所有信息，不能遗漏要点。其次叙述时要注意合理安排各种信息，使文章叙述有条理，结构清晰。第三，注意使用正确的时态，要用符合英语表达习惯的词汇、句型和短语，不要逐词翻译。注意动词形式的变化，如be动词和实意动词等。在表示我和朋友相比时，注意应使用比较级。最后多使用一些高级词汇或句型，增强文章的表现力，注意语句之间的连接，使文意连贯。

点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整，包含了题目要求的所有信息，并将这些信息进行整理，合理安排，使叙述清楚、明了，结构清晰，文章中有对Linda的介绍，也有自己和她的对比。其次短文语法规范，表达符合英语习惯，句式简洁，但又能准确表达题目信息。文章中多处使用了比较级的用法，如She is taller and quieter than me. She is serious. I am more outgoing than her. We both like reading. I am funnier than her, so I am more popular at school.，其他短语和句型的使用也很丰富，如She is as old as me. 、In some ways, we look the same. 、But in some ways, we are different.等。