Question

在过去的日子里，我们曾经欢笑，也曾经哭泣……照片，或将这些精彩定格，或勾起你对往事的回忆。某英语网站向你发出邀请，请你按要求用英语写一篇文章，分享你照片背后的故事。

要求：

1.故事必须原创；

2.80--120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；

3.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。

参考要点：

1.描述你的照片(时间，地点，人物……)；

2.分享你的故事(起因，经过，结果……)；

3.谈谈你的感受(感动，怀念，影响……)。

This is a photo that is very special to me. In the photo,                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                   

Answer

This is a photo that is very special to me. In the photo, I was 10 while my dad looked younger.Look,we are playing ping pong happily.

I used to be a ping pong player.My dad trained me so hard,though he was tired after a day’s work.Once,I lost a game and I felt so sad that I wanted to give up.My father said nothing,sitting quietly with me.The next morning,I found a piece of paper.It said,”Never give up,dear.I am proud of you.!”

Now,I spend less time play ping pong because of my busy study .But I will never forget what my fahter told me.He is proud of me.How lucky I am to be his daughter!

【解析】试题分析：这是一篇材料作文，参考要点就是本文的写作要点。这些要点构成写作的基本框架。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般过去时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

点睛：首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。