Question

书面表达

你即将进入高中（the Senior High School）学习生活。开学前，外籍老师在网上发了一张座位表，让同学自主选择座位。你的同学Mary、John已作出选择。请仔细阅读下列图表，用英文完成一篇短文。

要求：

1.描述这两位同学的座位位置和选择原因，可进行合理扩展；

2.请选择你的座位并予以描述，说明有别于他人的理由二至三条；

3.文中不得出现与学校和个人相关的真实信息。

4.词数：80个左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）

the Teacher’s Desk

	Mary
				John

Names	Seat	Reasons
Mary	Number 5, Row 1	listen more carefully, see clearly
John	Number 3, Row 3	be tall, like to be with classmates around
You	…	…

参考词汇：far from, next to, in front of, stay alone, be near-sighted

It’s so great to choose the seat myself in the Senior High School. My classmate Mary wants to sit ________________

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Answer

It’s so great to choose the seat myself in the Senior High School. My classmate Mary wants to sit near the teacher’s desk, so she chooses Number 5 in Row 1. She makes this choice because she wants to listen more carefully and see clearly during the class. John is another classmate of mine. Unlike Mary, he chooses Number 3 in Row 3, which is a little bit far from the teacher’s desk. This is because he is tall and likes to be with classmates around.

As for me, I would like to choose Number 4 in Row 1, in front of the teacher’s desk. On one hand, I am near-sighted. On the other hand, I want to stay alone during the class because this can let me pay attention to what the teacher says.

【解析】试题分析：本文是一篇材料作文。根据语境可知本文主要时态用一般现在时。考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，把提示内容要点写清：1.描述这两位同学的座位位置和选择原因，可进行合理扩展（Mary Number 5, Row 1 listen more carefully, see clearly；John Number 3, Row 3 be tall, like to be with classmates around）；2.请选择你的座位并予以描述，说明有别于他人的理由二至三条；3.文中不得出现与学校和个人相关的真实信息。4.词数：80个左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。可适当发挥，合理使用提示词（far from, next to, in front of, stay alone, be near-sighted），文中内容要连贯。本文只需根据提示内容，连词成句，并适当发挥想象即可。首先我们应运用正确的熟悉的英语句子，要尽量使用一些好的句型和连词，最好使用我们熟悉和背过的句型，尽量不要使用复杂的从句，减少语法错误，不要犯单词拼写上的错误。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较优秀的作文。内容要点完整、应用词汇灵活准确，句子通顺、表达清楚，上下文连贯。合理使用了提示词，应用了较丰富的语法结构和词汇（On the other hand, I want to stay alone during the class because this can let me pay attention to what the teacher says.），注意了连词（so，because，Unlike Mary, As for me, On one hand, On the other hand,）和时态的使用，没有语言错误，字数符合要求。