Question

书面表达

根据以下提供的信息，请你以“My friend”为题，介绍你的朋友。

1.我的最好的朋友名叫Millie, 13岁;

2.她每天早上6:00读英语，她学习很好;

3.她对我很好，总是帮我学英语;

4.我们经常坐在操场的树下，互相聊天或玩游戏;

5.她每个周二和周五去学校图书馆，有时放学后她和我练习打排球。

Answer

My friend

Millie is my best friend She is 13(years old). She reads English at six in the morning every day. She works/studies well. She is nice to me. She always helps me with my English. We often sit under the trees in the playground. We often chat with each other or play games. She goes to the school library every Tuesday and Friday. Sometimes she practises playing volleyball with me after school.

【解析】试题分析：这是一篇材料作文。以“My friend”为题，介绍你的朋友。我们要用简单准确的句子把所提供的信息表达出来。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，主语是第三人称。注意主谓一致关系。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文内容简明、扼要地阐明了自己的好友Millie的基本信息，并包含了文中所要求的全部信息。其中使用的句式和短语都很准确恰当，如: She is nice to me. She always helps me with my English. We often chat with each other or play games.文中还恰当地使用了反身代词，学习中再注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。