Question

现在，某英文报纸正在开展以“我要成为一个人”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿。谈谈你要成为一个什么样的人，为什么以及你怎么做才能成为那样的人。

提示词语： brave, honest, positive, help, love, believe

提示问题：●What kind of person do you want to be?

●Why do you want to be like that?

●How can you make it?

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Answer

I want to be a positive person. Being positive is the key to living a happy and healthy life. I think with a positive attitude, we can always find a way to love life, influence people and make this imperfect would a better place.

To achieve it, I must see the bright side of everything and everyone around me, especially when things don’t go my way. Also, more communication is necessary. The more I communicate with people around me, the better I will know them. Most importantly, I should believe that life will change for better. The road to become a positive person is not always easy, but I believe that I already have had a good start.

【解析】这篇作文要求我们以李华的身份给某报纸投稿，主要内容包括：你想要成为什么样的人；你为什么想要成为那样的人以及你该怎样做才能成为那样的人。在文章中应用正确的英语将这些内容表达清楚，并注意条理。通过分析可知，文章的写作重点应放在为什么想要成为那样的人以及怎样做这两个方面，应多使用一些语句来叙述。短文应主要使用一般现在时态，第一人称来叙述。注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，使用恰当的单词、短语和句型来表达，以应英语中简单句的五种句型为基础。为提升文章档次，应在短文中点缀一下高级句型，如宾语从句、状语从句、定语从句、非谓语动词等等。