Question

假如你是李华，你们学校上周开展了以“建设绿色校园”为主题的实践活动。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈在活动中你做了什么，你的感受以及保护环境的重要性。

提示词语：water the trees and flowers, collect the waste, happy, important

提示问题：●What did you do in the activity?

●How did you feel after the activity?

●What do you think of protecting the environment?

At my school, we held a practical activity about how to make a green school last week.

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Answer

At my school, we held a practical activity about how to take a green school last week. In the activity，I watered the trees and flowers. And I collected waste which can be recycled or used again. I also learned ways to save energy. Though I was tired, I was very happy.

I think it’s important to keep the environment clean. I believe if everyone pays attention to our environment protection, our school will be more beautiful and comfortable to study in.

【解析】这篇作文要求我们以李华的身份介绍自己学校上周举行的以“建设绿色校园”为主题的实践活动，谈谈在活动中你们都做了些什么，你的感受以及保护环境的重要性。题目中利用提示问题给我们列出了写作的提纲，我们应以这个提纲为基础，发挥想象里，结合自己的实际生活，将内容补充完整，并用正确的英语表达出来。通过分析可知，这篇作文需要介绍的是上周的活动，因此短文应以一般过去时态为主。但在叙述自己的感受和保护环境的重要性的时候，应用一般现在时态。因此写作时，学生们要特别注意谓语动词形式的变化，更需要注意一些不规则动词的过去式形式。写作时还应注意语句的连贯和表达的流畅，提升文章档次，如可以使用一些好的句型和短语，以及句子之间的连接成分。