Question

假如你是李华, 你得知某英文网站正在进行主题为“ Facing Problems”的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你遇到过什么困难,你是如何处理的,以及你从中学到了什么。

提示词语: be not good at, keep, help, give up

提示问题:· ●What problem did you have?

●How did you deal with it?

●What have you learned from the experience?

Answer

I was not good at running and I failed the running test. I felt very sad and talked about it with my parents. They encouraged me not to give up and came up with a fitness plan. In order to get up early in the morning, I set my clock at six a. m. and kept running every day. My parents also helped me a lot. They prepared healthy breakfast for me. With their help, I managed to pass the test finally. What’s more, I’m healthier than before.

Everyone may meet with problems in study or life, but we should never give up. It works better when we think of good ways to deal with them.

【解析】这篇作文要求我们以李华的身份给某英文网站投稿，讲述一下自己曾遇到过什么困难，是如果克服它的，以及从中学到了什么。题目中列出了一些提示语和提示问题，我们应这一提纲组织语言，划分文章结构，串联成文。通过分析可知，这篇作文主要包括三个内容：第一是你的困难的什么；第二是你如果处理的；第三是你从中学到了什么。叙述自己曾遇到的困难以及处理困难的时候，应使用一般过去时态；自己从中所学到的内容用一般现在时态，注意谓语动词形式的变化，尤其是不规则动词的过去式。英语的表达和汉语是不一样的，所以不能逐词翻译，应从句子的整体结构出发，使用恰当的单词和句型，同时注意语句之间的连接成分。