Question

假设你叫李平,你们班将于星期六骑单车去香山郊游,你打算邀请你们班的交换生Jim参加。请用英语写一封电子邮件，告诉他集合的时间和地点，活动的安排，以及需要做什么准。

提示词语: the Fragrant Hill, by Mobike, school gate, climb, shoes

提示问题：●When and where are you going to meet?

          ●What are you going to do there?

          ●What do you advise Jim to take?

To        Jim From      Li Ping Subjects   Trip to the Fragrant Hill Dear Jim, How is it going? I'm writing to invite you to go to the Fragrant Hill with us.                                       I’m looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Ping

Answer

Dear Jim,

How is it going?

I’m writing to invite you to go to the Fragrant Hill with us.

We are going there by Mobike this Saturday. Everybody will meet at the school gate at 8: 00 in the morning.Then we will cycle there together. It's a good time to visit the Fragrant Hill. There are a lot of beautiful flowers. We are going to climb the mountains and have a picnic on the top.

If you want to join us, you need to wear some comfortable shoes and take some food with you I’m sure you will have a great time.

I’m looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Ping

【解析】这篇作文要求我们以李华的身份给Jim写一封电子邮件，邀请他和你们班的学生们一起在星期六的时候骑单车去香山郊游，并在信中告诉他集合的时间、地点、活动安排以及需要做什么准备等。写信时，应将这些内容都包括其中，不要遗漏要点。题目中给出了提示语和问题提纲，我们应具体将这些内容用正确的英语表达出来。通过分析可知，文章的主体部分应该在活动的安排，这一部分内容应占篇幅较大。这篇短文说的是未发生的事情，因此我们应主要使用一般将来时态，注意动词形式的变化。写作时，要注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不要写汉语式的英语，应从句子结构出发，使用恰当的词汇和句型。为提升文章档次，在短文中应注意使用较高级的词汇和句型，并注意使用一些连接成分和过度成分。