Question

每一个人都有自己梦想的职业。假如你叫李平,请以“ My Dream Job”为题,用英语写一篇短文给某英语网站投稿,谈谈你梦想的职业是什么,为什么想从事这份职业,以及需要做什么准备来实现梦想。

提示词语: teacher, happy, study, develop

提示问题:· ●What do you want to be when you grow up?

●Why do you want to be a/an....?

          ● What are you going to do to make your dream come true?

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Answer

I want to be a teacher when I grow up. It's so much fun being with children. It makes me feel so happy. Children are always creative and surprise you all the time! I am sure it's not very easy to be a good teacher. But I am going to study harder so that I can teach knowledge to my students. I am going to develop my communication skills so I will be able to talk to them when they have problems. I hope my dream will come true in the future.

【解析】这篇作文要求我们以My Dream Job为题，为某英语网站投稿。其主要内容包括：你长大后想成为什么；你为什么想要从事这份职业以及你该怎样做来实现自己的梦想。通过分析可知，文章的主要内容应在为什么想要从事这份职业以及自己的准备上，写作时应注意内容上合理的安排。根据表达的需要选择适当的时态，应以一般将来时态和一般过去时态为主，注意正确使用谓语动词的形式。另外还应注意英语表达和汉语习惯的不同，不能逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语，应从句子结构出发，以简单句为基础，表达清楚自己的意思，并点缀几个复合句或较复杂的句式，来提升文章的水平。