Question

假如你叫李华，你想邀请外国朋友David来参加学校的科技节活动（Science Festival）。请你写一封邮件告诉他活动的时间和地点，活动上准备做些什么，以及他需要做哪些准备。

  提示词语：special, invention, do some experiments, notebook

  提示问题：●When and where will you have your Science Festival?

            ●What will you do at the festival?

            ●What is your advice to prepare for the festival?

Dear David,

How is it going?

I’m writing to invite you to our school Science Festival.

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I’m looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer

Dear David,

How is it going?

I’m writing to invite you to our school Science Festival. The festival will start at 3o’clock this Friday afternoon on the playground.

There will be plenty of special activities about science. Some interesting inventions will be introduced to us, such as a yo-yo which can sing songs and a toy bear that can talk with people. We can also try to do some experiments to see how colors changed.

You’d better take your notebook with you because you may want to take some notes about things out of books.

I’m looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】这篇作文要求我们以李华的身份给外国朋友David写一封电子邮件，邀请他参加学校的科技节活动，并在信中告诉他这次活动的时间、地点、活动的主要安排以及你建议他应该做的准备等等。写信时，应将这些内容都包括其中，不要遗漏要点。题目中给出了提示语和问题提纲，我们应具体将这些内容用正确的英语表达出来。通过分析可知，这篇短文我们应主要使用一般将来时态，注意动词形式的变化。写作时，要注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不要写汉语式的英语，应从句子结构出发，使用恰当的词汇和句型。为提升文章档次，在短文中应注意使用较高级的词汇和句型，并注意使用一些连接成分和过度成分。