Question

书面表达

随着网络的不断发展，传统的学习模式受到冲击。“网上学习（online learning）”这一新的学习模式备受青睐。假设你是陈欣，最近某英文杂志正在讨论中学生是否应该通过网络进行在线学习。以下是你所在班级的讨论情况，请你给该报投稿，反映讨论结果并谈谈你自己的想法。

提示：

观点	赞成	反对
理由	1. 网上资源（resource）丰富 2. 可以自由（freedom）选择学习内容和时间	1. 网上信息太多，有些不真实 2. 长时间用电脑对眼睛不好

要求：1、词数不少于80词，稿件的开头已给出，不计入总词数，可适当发挥。

2、向子结构准确，要点齐全，内容合理，篇章结构连贯；

3、文中不能出现真实姓名、校名、地名。

Dear Editor,

Recently, our class had a discussion about whether students should learn on the Internet.

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Answer

Dear Editor,

Recently, our class had a discussion about whether students should learn on the Internet.

Some students support it. They think online learning is much more convenient and the Internet is filled with useful resources. What’s more, learners have freedom to decide what and when to learn. However, some students don’t welcome it. Although, they think there’s a lot of information on the Internet. Some information isn’t true. Also, spending a long time searching information online is bad for their eyes.

In my opinion, every coin has two ideas. I think it’s better to use both the traditional way of learning and online learning. Students should use the Internet properly.

【解析】试题本篇书面表达以“网上学习（online learning）”为话题，结合本题所给的写作信息，阐述网上学习的两种不同的观点。根据内容提示可知本文应运用一般现在时态，注意一些常见句式的应用。写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用，使文意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富的语句，注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，最后最好要表达出自己的感想和看法。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。文中more convenient，is filled with, what’s more, a lot of ，however, although, spend... doing...,be bad for, in my opinion等词（组）恰当使用，使上下文意连接紧密；文中还多处使用了宾语从句、让步状语从句、动名词作主语等句式，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，值得学习。