Question

假如你是李华，即将结束在美国的交换学习，回国前你想给住家妈妈Sarah写封感谢信，告诉她你什么时候回国，为什么感谢她，以及你的感受。

提示词语： help, care, communicate, drive to hospital, own family

提示要点：When are you going to leave?

Why do you want to say ‘thank you’ to her?

How do you feel?
Dear Sarah,
 

I’m writing to deliver my thanks to you.                                       

Thanks again for taking care of me so well.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer

Dear Sarah,

I’m writing to deliver my thanks to you. I am going to leave the US next Tuesday morning. I really want to say thanks to you because of your help and care during my stay here. I will never forget you offered to help when I had difficulty in communicating with others in English, and I will never forget you drove me to the hospital in the late night when I didn’t feel well.

Staying with your family is just like being with my own family, which reminds me of the saying, “East or west, home is best.”

Thanks again for taking care of me so well.

【解析】

此文为提纲式作文，文章属于感谢信。文章可分为三段，第一段表明写信的目的；第二段分析感谢的具体原因；第三段写出你在住家妈妈Sarah家里的感受。文章用第一人称来写，时态主要用一般过去时和一般将来时。

亮点表示感激的句型：I’m writing to deliver my thanks to you.

Thanks again for taking care of me so well.

[高分句型一]

I will never forget you offered to help when I had difficulty in communicating with others in English. 我永远不会忘记，当我用英语和别人交流困难时，你主动提出帮助我。句子中有when引导的时间状语从句。

[高分句型二]

Staying with your family is just like being with my own family, which reminds me of the saying, “East or west, home is best.” 住在您们家里就像住在我自己的家里一样，这让我想起了一句话：“天下之大, 家最美好。” 其中which reminds me of the saying是由which引导的定语从句。