Question

    某英文网站正在开展以“我最喜欢的中华传统节日”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你最喜欢的传统节日是什么，节日里你通常都做什么，以及你为什么喜欢这个节日。

提示词语：festival, get together, enjoy, moon cakes, harvest time

提示问题：

●    What’s your favorite traditional festival?

●    What do you usually do during the festival?

●    Why do you like it?

There are many traditional festivals in China. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

There are many traditional festivals in China. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer

There are many traditional festivals in China. My favourite one is Mid-autumn Festival and it usually comes on August 15 of the lunar year.

On the festival we usually go back home from other cities or places and have a big dinner with the whole family. After dinner, we often eat moon cakes, watch the full moon and talk with each other happily.

I like Mid-autumn Festival best not only because I like the delicious moon cakes but also because it’s a family get-together time and I really enjoy the love among the family members.

【解析】

这是一篇话题作文，根据话题要求来介绍一下中国的传统节日。根据所提供的提示词语可知，要求介绍中国的传统节日：中秋节。可以从你最喜欢的传统节日是中秋节，节日里你通常都做什么，以及你为什么喜欢中秋节三个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。注意在给报社的投稿中必须包含提示词语中的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语把所给的提示问题回答清楚就行。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。

【高分句型一】

On the festival we usually go back home from other cities or places and have a big dinner with the whole family. 在节日里，我们会从不同的地方回家，和全家团聚，一起吃大餐。由and连接的并列句。

【高分句型二】

I like Mid-autumn Festival best not only because I like the delicious moon cakes but also because it’s a family get-together time and I really enjoy the love among the family members. 我最喜欢中秋节，不仅因为我喜欢美味的月饼，而且因为它是一个家庭聚会时间，我真的很享受家庭成员之间的爱。句子中运用了not only…… but also……，还有because引导的原因状语从句。