Question

假如你叫李海，是阳光中学八年级的一名学生。你现在写电邮给英国的网友Peter介绍你的学校生活，包括你学习的科目，你每天上多少节课，上放学时间，你的课外活动，经常和你一起玩的朋友；你还爱好旅游，上周日你还去了世界公园，看了…, 你在那儿玩得很开心。

请你完成这封信，要求包含以上要点，必要时进行拓展。

注意：80词左右（已给出的文章开头不计入总词数）。

Dear Peter,

     How is everything going on with you? Today I am going to tell you about my school life.   

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     I enjoy my school life. I hope to hear from you soon.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hai

Answer

Dear Peter,

How is everything going on with you? Today I am going to tell you about my school life.

I learn subjects like Chinese, English and Maths. I have four classes in the morning and three in the afternoon. We begin our classes at about eight and finish at about five. We can have our after-school activities on Wednesday. I go to the Computer Club because I like computers. My friend Zhang Yong is my classmate. We often play football, see movies and do homework together. We don’t go to school at weekends. Last Sunday I went to the World Park with my parents. There we saw many models of places of interest. They looked real and amazing. We had a good time there.

I enjoy my school life. I hope to hear from you soon.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hai

【解析】

这是一篇关于学校生活和课外生活的材料作文。

亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如in the morning/afternoon，at about eight，on Wednesday，go to the Computer Club，play football，do homework，go to school，at weekends，Last Sunday，with my parents，have a good time等。而I go to the Computer Club because I like computers. 等复合句的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样，是本文的最大亮点。