Question

假如你在一所学校就读八年级。众所周知，一所学校，往往因为老师能成为学生的良师益友，从而使这所学校成为你心目中的理想学校，尤其是我们的班主任老师（head-teacher）。请根据中文提示，写一篇100字左右的英语短文介绍你的班主任Mr. White以及你心目中的理想学校。

提示：1、你是在两年前认识了你的班主任Mr. White。他不高，也不胖，乐于助人，真心对待每一位学生，学生们都喜欢他；

2、你的学校开设了许多科目，学生们可以选择科目学习；

3、你们学校开设了许多兴趣小组，学生有大量的时间进行课外活动，而且，你们学校经常组织学校旅游，你们生活很快乐；

4、你长大后想成为……。

要求：

1、短文须包括提示内容，可以适当添加细节；

3、写作时应该思路清晰，语句通顺，注意段落；

2、短文开头已经给出，不计入总词数。

My Head-teacher—Mr. White

     Mr. White is both my teacher and good friend. ________________________________

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Answer

My Head-teacher—Mr. White

Mr. White is both my teacher and good friend. We first met him two years ago.

Mr. White is tall and looks very smart as well. He is very helpful and often helps us with our lessons. He is kind and a true friend. We all like him very much.

Our school is also our ideal school. There are many subjects to learn. We can choose subjects to study. There are a lot of clubs in our school. We have lots of time for after-school activities. We often go on school trips. We always have fun.

I would like to be a teacher when I grow up. I think I will make an excellent teacher like our head-teacher.

【解析】

本文要求介绍班主任老师和学校活动，是一篇典型的提纲作文。

亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如both…and，looks smart，as well，help us with sth.，very much，a lot of，after-school activities，school trips，grow up等。而He is very helpful and often helps us with our lessons./ There are many subjects to learn./ I would like to be a teacher when I grow up.等并列句、复合句和特殊句式的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样，是本文的最大亮点。