Question

根据下面提示，完成短文。题目“My Ideal School”。词数80左右。

1.起床晚，所以希望上学晚，放学早。有很多的空余时间。

2学校餐厅大而明亮。可以在那里吃饭或聊天。

3.每天都上电脑课。每人一台电脑，可以玩游戏。

4.有藏书丰富的图书馆，网球场和游泳池。

5.作业少，课外活动多。周末不用做作业。

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Answer

My Ideal School

I often get up late, so my ideal school starts at 9 a.m. It finishes at 3 p.m., so we will have more free time to play games. There is a big and bright dining hall. We can eat and chat there. We can have computer lessons every day. Everyone has a computer to play computer games. My ideal school has a library with lots of books, and it also has a tennis court and a swimming pool. We want to have less homework and more after-school activities. It will be better if we do not have to do any homework at weekends.

【解析】

本文要求写一篇关于理想中的学校是什么样子的文章，需要结合试题中所给的要点提纲来发挥。

亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如get up，play games，every day，want to do sth.，after-school activities，have to，at weekends等。而It finishes at 3 p.m., so we will have more free time to play games. / It will be better if we do not have to do any homework at weekends.等多种从句的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样，是本文的最大亮点。