Question

书面表达

2017年如皋籍警察李百战被评为“全国优秀人民警察”，假如你是学校通讯站的一名小记者，对李百战进行了采访，请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇稿件，向同学们介绍这个优秀的片儿警。

一个勤学的人	1. 博览群书，勤学上进；
一个敬业的人	1．创建QQ, 关爱邻里； 2．探访孤寡，排忧解难。
一个懂礼仪的人	1．遵守交通，排队谦让； 2．公众场所，保持安静。
一个有爱心的人	热心慈善，捐资捐物； ……(请自拟一点内容)
一个绿色生活的人	减少污染，骑车步行； 节约能源，关灯关水。
你的感受	……(请自拟一点内容)

注意： 

1. 表达中必须包含所给要点，可以适当发挥，不要简单翻译。

2. 词数80左右，开头已经写好，不计入总词数。

3. 表达中请勿提及真实校名和姓名。

提示：创建qq群   set up QQ groups

片儿警  a local regional policeman

Li Baizhan, the Most Excellent Policeman, was born in Rugao. _____________________

Answer

Li Baizhan, the Most Excellent Policeman, was born in Rugao. He is hard-working. He works hard and reads all kinds of books. He is proud to be a policeman. He has set up QQ groups in order to help people in the neighbourhood. In his free time, he often cares about the children who have no parents and the people whose husband or wife has died. He often tried his best to help them solve the problems.

What’s more, Li Baizhan is a man who has good manners. He always obeys the traffic rules and he is patient enough to wait in line. It’s polite of him to keep quite in public places.

Also, he is a man who is warm-hearted. He takes part in charities actively, and it’s generous of him to donate money and other things to the poor. He once helped a girl who couldn’t afford to go to school return to school. Besides, he lives a green life. In order to reduce pollution, he goes to work by bike or on foot. He can turn off the lights and taps to save resourses.

It’s clear that Li Baizhan is an excellent local regional policeman. He has set good examples, so we should learn from him.

【解析】

亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如be born，all kinds of，be proud to be，set up，in order to，care about，try one’s best，in public places，a green life，on foot，turn off，learn from等。而In his free time, he often cares about the children who have no parents and the people whose husband or wife has died./ What’s more, Li Baizhan is a man who has good manners.等多种定语从句结构和It’s polite of him to keep quite in public places./ It’s clear that Li Baizhan is an excellent local regional policeman,等it特殊句式的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。