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话题13 保护环境

节约资源， 保护环境，从我们身边的小事做起。假设你是一个注重“低碳”生活的中学生， 请以“My Low­carbon Life” 为题写一篇英文演讲稿，简单谈谈“低碳生活”的重要性，以及你所倡导的“低碳生活”方式。内容提示：

1．每天步行上学； 

2.离开教室时，关灯、风扇、电脑等；

3.不用水时， 记住关水龙头，而且要循环使用水；

4.不使用塑料袋。

写作要求：

1．词数80个左右；文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息。

My Low­carbon Life

It's our duty to protect the environment.

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Lower carbon, happier life.Let's take action.

Answer

My Low­carbon Life

It's our duty to protect the environment.

As we all know, with the global warming and energy consumption, the environment is becoming worse and worse.It is very important for us to start with a low­carbon lifestyle.But how can we live a low carbon life? Here are my ideas.

Firstly, it is a very good idea for us to go to school on foot instead of by car.It is good for the environment and our health as well.Secondly, remember to turn off the lights, fans and computers when we leave the classrooms.Thirdly, it is important for us to turn off the tap when we finish using the water.We can reuse water, too.For example, we can reuse the water to water the flowers or trees.At last, try to use the cloth shopping bags instead of plastic bags when we go shopping.(In addition, it is important for us to use fewer fast food boxes or chopsticks so that we can reduce the white pollution.)

I believe our life will become better and better if we can do these things.

Lower carbon, happier life.Let's take action.

【解析】

这篇作文要求我们以My Low-carbon Life为题，介绍一下低碳生活的重要性，以及在我们的日常生活中如何做到低碳生活。题目中有简单扼要的内容提示，但只写这些内容显然是不够的，这些只是对我们写作的一个要点提示，写作时，应根据这些提示和题目要求，组织语言，丰富内容，使文章的内容更加完整、丰富。这就需要学生们自己发挥想象力，联系自己的实际生活，结合自己的实际做法进行阐述。通过分析可知，这篇短文应以一般现在时态为主，第一人称we来叙述，注意谓语动词的正确形式。英语句式的表达与汉语是不同的，写作时不能逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语，而应从句子的整体结构出发，以简单句为基础，穿插使用并列句或复合句。并注意使用恰当的词汇、句型和短语，语句之间使用适当的连接成分，使文意连贯，表达流畅。