Question

（题文）假如你叫张梦，你给的笔友Mike写信介绍你的房间的情况：一张桌子，一张床，桌子上有书、电脑，桌子旁边有一把椅子，床下有足球和鞋子，墙上挂着一副中国地图,窗台附近有些花等。

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Answer

Dear Mike,

This is my bedroom. There is a bed and a desk in my bedroom. You can see some books and a computer on the desk. A chair is near the desk on the floor. My shoes and football are under my bed. There are some flowers near the window. On the wall is a map of China. My bedroom is clean and beautiful. I love it very much.

Yours

Zhang Meng

【解析】

本文属于材料作文，介绍你的房间的情况。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，如there be, in my bedroom, on the desk, on the floor, under my bed, near the window, on the wall, a map of China,等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。