Question

假如你是某社区的一名住户，你给你的朋友David写了一封电子邮件，介绍你所在社区的“援手”活动。内容如下：

1 志愿者每周六上午九点举行援手会议。 2 他们聚集在社区中心，分享技能，帮助我们解决各种问题

3 电脑坏了，可以找他们，自行车坏了，可以找他们。4 学生的作业需要帮助，他们乐意帮忙

5 周末他们总是去看望老人，为他们买东西。6 住在这样的小区我们很幸福。

Dear David,

I’m glad to write to you. Now let me tell you something about the activities in our community. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

I hope to get your letter soon.

Yours

Li Hua

Answer

Dear David,

I’m glad to write to you. Now let me tell you something about the activities in our community.

There are many college students who are volunteers in our community. They hold a helper meeting every Saturday at 9 a.m. They gather in community centers, share different skills, and help us with all kinds of problems. If there is something wrong with our computers or bicycles, we can get their help. Even when some children need help with their homework, they are willing to help. On weekends they always visit the old people and buy things for them. We are very happy to live in such a small community.

I hope to get your letter soon.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如be glad to，write to sb.，in our community，gather in，help with，all kinds of，something wrong，be willing to，buy for，live in，such a small community等。而并列句They gather in community centers, share different skills, and help us with all kinds of problems.和If there is something wrong with our computers or bicycles, we can get their help./Even when some children need help with their homework, they are willing to help.等多种从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。