Question

书面表达

如今的交通已经成了许多城市的主要困扰。假如你是一名工程师，请你设计一种交通工具，既可以解决部分交通运行的问题，又有助于环保。

要求：

1. 要展开大胆的想象，可以假设为一种空中交通工具，也可以是地上交通工具。

2. 内容要合理、完整、丰富与流畅。

3. 词数：不少于80。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

An Important Vehicle

As an engineer, I try my best to invent an important vehicle.  It's________________________________________________________________________

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I hope my idea can come true one day, and everyone can be interested in it.

Answer

An Important Vehicle

As an engineer, I try my best to invent an important vehicle. It's an air bus. You are right. It's a kind of special bus, and it can also fly in the air. When there are too many cars and buses on the street, it can fly in the air. It doesn't cause any accidents or trouble. At the same time, it is so convenient that lots of people will take it.

On the bus, there are enough seats for the passengers. What's more, it doesn't run on oil but a kind of special water. That's to say it will be very good for people to take it, because it doesn't produce any pollution at all.

I hope my idea can come true one day, and everyone can be interested in it.

【解析】

这是一篇给材料作文。假如你是一名工程师，要求你展开大胆的想象，设计一种交通工具，可以假设为一种空中交通工具，也可以是地上交通工具；既可以解决部分交通运行的问题，又有助于环保。根据所给的提示材料可知本文时态用一般现在时，人称主要为第一和第三人称。在写作时，要注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查字数是否符合要求。