Question

书面表达。

你的朋友打算这个星期天下午2:00去野营，地点就在海边的小公园。你给Bob 写了一封邀请信。请按照下面的线路，写信给Bob：沿着Happy Road往前走，在红绿灯处向左拐，在第二个拐弯处向右拐，走过桥进入Binghe Road，一直往前走，就会看到海边的小公园。公园里鸟语花香，我们既可以泛舟湖上，也可以唱歌、跳舞、做游戏。公园里还有一个小动物园，你可以看到各种各样的动物。长颈鹿们的长脖子帮助它们吃树上的叶子；猴子跳来跳去，引人发笑；大象的大耳朵就像张开的扇子。我确定这会非常有趣。

Answer

Dear Bob,

I am very glad to invite you to a picnic. We will have the picnic in the small park near the sea at 2:00 p.m this Sunday. Here is the way to it: Go along Happy Road and take the second turning on the right. Walk across the bridge into Binghe Road. Go straight on, you will see the small park near the sea. The park is very beautiful. We can go boating there, and we can also sing, dance and play games. There is a small zoo in the park, so we can see all kinds of animals. We will see the giraffes. Their long necks help them eat the leaves from the tree. The monkeys jump around and make people laugh. The elephants’ ears are like open fans. I hope you can come to have a good time with us.

Yours faithfully,

Tim

【解析】

本篇作文主要讲述了星期天要和朋友去野营, 想邀请Bob去参加，并给他交代了地址和那里比较好玩的地方。写作时注意条理清晰，和汉译英的正确性，注意且不可逐条翻译，注意句子和句子之间的连贯性。本文两点：首先在格式上符合书信要求，思路条理清晰。句式也体现了多样性，例如Go straight on, you will see the small park near the sea. The monkeys jump around and make people laugh. 在语句之间使用了一些例如and, so, 等连词，使文章具有连贯性，是一篇很不错的文章。