Question

    假定你是某国际学校的学生李华。最近，你校打算为同学们制作统一的校服，请你给外籍校长威尔逊先生写一封电子邮件，要点如下：

1. 写邮件的目的；

2. 对校服布料、款式等提出建议并说明理由。

参考词汇：校服uniform；款式style

注意：1. 词数80-100；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头和结尾己给出，伹不计入总词数。

Dear Mr. Wilson,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer

例文：

Dear Mr. Wilson,

Knowing that our school will order uniform for us, I am writing to make some suggestions.

Our uniform is worn almost every day, so it would be great if you could understand what students like. First of all, I’d prefer it to be made of cotton because cotton feels soft and is good for our skin. Second, it’s tiring to see the same clothes everywhere at school, so please let boys and girls have different uniforms. Third, I suggest that you provide four or five styles for us to choose from. All students can vote and choose their favorite styles.

I’d be honored if you could take my suggestions into consideration.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

1.题干解读：本题是书信作文，要求考生以李华的身份，就学校打算为同学们制作统一的校服一事，给校长写一封邮件。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，只给出写作框架，并未给出所有的具体写作细节，为半开放性写作。写好此文，需注意三点：一是写信格式要准确。二是要详略得当，本文应重点写的是写信的目的和对校服的布料、款式等提出建议并说明理由。三要注意适当地增加细节，恰当地使用连接过渡词，以使行文连贯。另外，在写作时要注意时态、语态的合理运用。