Question

    本周末Jerry将邀请朋友Jim 一同参加一个社区活动,请根据以下内容写一封邀请信

时间	4月29日下午1点开始
地点	城市花园社区中心,位于南通北部
环境	空气新鲜,鸟语花香
路线	从镇中心乘地铁15分钟。出了A出口,向左拐再直走,看见一家银行,社区中心在银行的右边
活动内容	请自拟一点活动

参考词汇: A 出口Exit A

注意:1.邀请信中必须包含所有要点,具体内容可以适当发挥。

2.词数90字左右,开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。

3.邀请信中请勿提及真实校名和人名。

Dear Jim,

We are going to have a "helping hands" meeting this week. I'd like to invite you to the meeting.

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I'm looking forward to seeing you soon.

Yours,

Jerry

Answer

例文：

Dear Jim,

We are going to have a "helping hands" meeting this week. I'd like to invite you to the meeting.

The meeting will begin at 1 p.m.on April 29th in the center of city garden community.It lies in the north of Nan tong. There is Fresh air, singing birds and fragrant flowers.It will take you 15 minutes to reach Exit A by underground.Then turn left,next go straight,you will see a bank.The center is on the right of it.We can help clean our park together at the meeting.

I'm looking forward to seeing you soon.

Yours,

Jerry

【解析】

1、题干解读：题目要求你邀请朋友Jim一同参加一个社区活动，要求包含所给的全部要点。

2、高分亮点：例文采用三段式；时态主要以一般现在时为主；例文详细介绍了活动的具体内容等；结构清晰；逻辑性强。

3、高分亮点：

短语：in the center of；in the north of；turn left；go straight；on the right of；clean our park。

句型：It will take you 15 minutes to reach Exit A by underground；There is Fresh air, singing birds and fragrant flowers。

【点晴】

首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如in the center of；in the north of；turn left；go straight；on the right of；clean our park等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。