Question

    假设你是张文，是江阴星光中学 (Jiangyin Starlight Middle School) 的一名学生，你将代表你校参加CCTC举办的“A good habit, a successful life”为主题的演讲，请根据下图写一篇英文演讲稿。

Introduce yourself (name, school ...)

Why good habits are important

How you develop good habits (lifestyle; hobbies; …

注意事项：

1. 演讲稿根据流程图自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；

2. 路程图括号部分为非限定性内容，仅供参考；

3. 词数在90个左右，演讲稿的首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总数；

4. 演讲稿中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息。

Ladies and gentlemen,

It's a great honor for me to speak here. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Trust me! If you have a good habit, you will have a successful life in the future.

Answer

例文

Ladies and gentlemen,

It's a great honor for me to speak here.

I’m a student from Jiangyin Starlight Middle School. My name is Zhang Wen. Good habits are very important to all of us. It can not only build up our body and keep us healthy but also make our mind clear and smart. It can help us become more organized, too. In order to have a good habit, I have developed a good lifestyle. I have changed my diet and I exercise a lot every day. I plan my time more carefully to achieve a balance between my study and hobbies.

Trust me! If you have a good habit, you will have a successful life in the future.

【解析】

题干根据题干，可知这一篇演讲稿，主要内容是代表学校参加以“良好的习惯，成功的生活”为主题写一篇英文演讲稿。文章内容分为三个层面，首先介绍自己，然后阐述良好习惯的重要性，最后谈谈怎样培养好习惯。演讲稿内容层次清晰，时态以一般现在时为主。

例文这是一篇优秀的例文，很好的完成了试题所给的任务，符合英语语境的表达。开头先介绍了自己的学校和姓名，然后从四个方面阐述了好习惯的重要性，最后详细介绍了自己已经养成了哪些好习惯。例文写的非常详细与具体，当中还有一些亮点词汇，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

亮点词句：

短语：not only… but also… 不仅……而且……； build up 增强； change my diet 改变饮食； achieve a balance between 在……之间达成平衡。

句型：(1) It can not only build up our body and keep us healthy but also make our mind clear and smart. 它不仅可以增强我们的身体，使我们保持健康，还可以使我们的头脑清晰、聪明。 make our mind clear and smart使我们的头脑清晰、聪明。 (2) In order to have a good habit, I have developed a good lifestyle. 为了养成良好的习惯，我养成了良好的生活方式。developed a good lifestyle 养成了良好的生活方式。（3）I plan my time more carefully to achieve a balance between my study and hobbies. 我会更仔细地计划时间，以在学习和爱好之间取得平衡。achieve a balance between 在……之间达成平衡。