Question

    假如你叫李华，在秋季研学活动中，你交到了一个新朋友张明。请根据以下提示内容，给他写一封邮件，并邀请他到你家做客。要点如下:

1.介绍你自己及你的家人。(年龄，班级，爱好，职业等)

2.描述你的房间物品的摆放情况。

要求：

1可适当发挥，语句通顺，语意连贯;

3.字数：60词左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总字数)

4.文章中不得出现真实的校名、人名等个人信息。

Dear Zhang Ming,I'm your new friend, Li Hua _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer

Dear Zhang Ming,

I'm your new friend, Li Hua. I’m writing to be your host family and I would like to express our warmest welcome to your coming.

I am a student of Xinhua Middle School. I am in Class 1, Grade 7. I like listening to rock music very much. I have a big family. There are five people in my family. They are my grandparents, my parents and me. My grandparents are government workers and my parents are teachers.

I have a big bedroom. There is a big bed, a desk, a chair and a piano in it. The desk is beside the bed and the piano is by the window. I like staying here.

Welcome to my home as soon as possible.

【解析】

1、题干解读

本题目属于记叙文写作，根据内容提示写一封信邀请新朋友到家里做客，所以写作格式按照信件格式。第一段写问候语；第二段介绍自己的家庭的基本情况；第三段介绍卧室的情况；第四段是结束语。

2、例文点评

例文采用四段式结构；时态采用一般现在时为主；人称采用第一人称；对家庭情况的描述很细致、条理。

3、高分亮点

短语：listen to rock music；beside the bed；by the window

句型：I like listening to rock music very much.

There are five people in my family.