Question

    5月22日是世界野生动物保护日。现今人类活动破坏了野生动物的生活环境，使他们失去了家园，濒临灭绝。保护野生动物是每个人的责任。请根据思维导图，以Protecting Wild Animals为题写一篇短文，呼吁人类保护野生动物。

要求：

1.内容要全面，可适当发挥，语言表达要准确，语意要通顺连贯；

2.词数不少于100，开头已给出，但不计入总词数。

提示词  fur n. 皮毛；a wild animal protection group野生动物保护组织

Protecting Wild Animals

Wild animals are our friends. We live on the same earth. So protecting them is protecting ourselves.

But today_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Please join us. Let’s try our best to protect wild animals.

Answer

例文

Protecting Wild Animals

Wild animals are our friends. We live on the same earth. So protecting them is protecting ourselves.

But today more and more animals are in great danger. Many of them are endangered. Humans cut down trees and the environment is polluted seriously, so the animals are losing their homes. People also kill them for money and fur, and some even eat the meat.

How can we protect the endangered wild animals? The government should set up a wild animal protection group. We should also learn more about wild animals. Our government should develop laws to stop the sale of wild animals.

Please join us. Let’s try our best to protect wild animals.

【解析】

1.本文是一篇话题作文。本文以“保护野生动物”为题，描述动物所面临的情况，保护野生动物的原因及方法。

2.本文采用的是第一人称和第三人称，时态采用的是一般现在时。准确运用时态，并保持主谓一致。逻辑性强，句子通顺。

3.高分亮点：

短语：in danger处于危险中；cut down砍倒；set up设立；try one’s best to do sth尽某人最大努力去做某事。

句子：Humans cut down trees and the environment is polluted seriously句中运用了一般现在时的被动语态；Let’s try our best to protect wild animals此句是一个祈使句。