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书面表达

某报社正在就“The person who I admire most”为题进行征文比赛。假设你的叔叔对你的学习生活影响非常大，你非常钦佩你的叔叔。请你根据表格提供的有关叔叔的信息和要求写一篇文章向该报社投稿。.

职业	作家	年龄	三十几岁
品质	有条理	从不忘记他需要做的事
勤奋	熬夜，做额外的工作
乐于助人	献血妤几次 (…请再举一例)
最爱的颜色	红色	象征…
对我的帮助	倾听我的烦恼，告诉我不要放弃 (请自己再发挥一条)

注意：1. 开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；

2. 词数不少于80字，可以根据要求作适当发挥。 

The person who I admire most

I would like to talk about my Uncle Tom who I admire most.                                          

Answer

The person who I admire most

He is a writer. Now he is in his thirties. He is a person with great patience, and he never forgets the things he has to do. He is very diligent. He always stays up late and does the extra work. More importantly, he is always ready to help others. He often looks after old people in Old People’s Home. He has ever donated her blood for several times. Red is his favorite color, because it stands for energetic. When I am feeling sad, it is my uncle who listens to me carefully. When I have some difficulties in my studies, it is also my uncle who encourages me not to give up until I solve the problem. I love my uncle.

【解析】

这是一篇给材料作文。文中给出了一些要点，并给出了开头。我们要做的是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象，说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知，本文主要以第三人单数，用一般现在时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文紧密联系，符合逻辑关系。本人内容合理，结构连贯，段落清晰，要点齐全，多次运用固定短语以及复合句。如：be ready to do, to one’s surprise, when引导的时间状语从句，who引导的定语从句等，为文章增色不少。