Question

时下越来越多的人使用智能手机（smart phone）。智能手机给我们生活带来便利的同时，也产生许多不好的影响。我们身边有很多“低头族（phubbers）”。请根据所给要点信息，写一篇短文告诫身边的同学。

What advantages and disadvantages have smart phones brought us?

Tell us one of your unhappy experiences about using smart phones.

What will you do with your own smart phone?

要求：1．词数90左右。题目与开头已给出，不计入总词数。

      2．所写内容必须包括所有信息，语句通顺，意思连贯，可适当发挥。

      3．不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。

Refuse to be phubbers

More and more people are using smart-phones nowadays.

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Answer

Refuse to be phubbers

More and more people are using smart phones.

Smart phones are helpful to our lives. We can use them to read news, shop online and so on. But some of us play with them too often. It has caused bad effects on us. Phubbers can be seen here and there.

One Sunday morning, I was looking at my smart phone while walking. A car nearly hit me. How terrible! I won’t do it any more.

I won’t spend much time on smart phones because it’s bad for my health and study. I will use my smart phone wisely and try not to be phubbers. (96 words)

【解析】

本题是话题作文。学生首先要认真审题,确定文章的中心。智能手机给我们生活带来便利的同时，也产生许多不好的影响。即写作时要写利弊，最好分段来表达。此外，还可以穿插描述一些现象比如低头族，手机控等。文章最后可以写自己的感悟和将要采取的措施等。写作的文章具有一定的连贯性,还应注意使用一些连接词,使文章的表达更有逻辑性和条理性。写作时还要注意:1.书写规范；2.可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯；3.写完后要认真检查是否有漏写要点,有无拼写错误等。高分句型：Smart phones are helpful to our lives.智能手机对我们的生活很有帮助。We can use them to read news, shop online and so on.我们可以用它们来阅读新闻，网上购物等等。One Sunday morning, I was looking at my smart phone while walking.一个星期天的早晨，我边走边看我的智能手机。How terrible! I won’t do it any more.真可恶!我不会再做了。I won’t spend much time on smart phones because it’s bad for my health and study.我不会花很多时间在智能手机上，因为它对我的健康和学习不好。